Comment on Storm Hawks:Fall of the Witch, Rise of the Phoenix

1. Yinny on Chapter 8 Fri 06 Sep 2024 08:14AM UTC

   

   Poor Cyclonis having to deal with Anarchis at such a young age :,) I love the way you made her manipulate her granddaughter tho! Keeps it subtle, breaks her apart and picks up the pieces imminently like she wasn't the one causing the damage, it's brilliant XD

   Amazing job with the characterization and writing too! I really enjoyed it ^^

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2. 1. Melodramatic_Jester on Chapter 8 Sun 08 Sep 2024 04:38AM UTC

      

      Thank you! I wanted to actually try and characterize the grandmother outside of just Cy's internal monologue. Glad I did her justice.

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