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  1. NightArt on Chapter 2 Wed 25 Sep 2024 04:51AM UTC

    The conflict between wanting to be alone VS wanting to be near others is something I'm trying to balance carefully. Don't wanna make it seem rushed.

    I can't say much about the band since they'll be explored in future chapters, but yes, they're much more chill this time around. :v

    I had the idea of swapping Fernsworth for the Plague Doctor one day and I couldn't just NOT do it lol. There'll be plenty more cameos in the future as well, so keep an eye out for that e.e

    Once again, thank you for reading, and have a great day/night!

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    1. Dismas0tower on Chapter 2 Wed 25 Sep 2024 05:19AM UTC

      Por cierto olvide decir/opinar que me agrada que ahora sí se hace énfasis y/o mencion a las cicatrices de tanto fang como naser (aunque de este ultimo y sabíamos) ya que (perfectamente podria estar equivocado) pero en la versión original no se menciona nada de los daños de fang hasta la parte donde hablan que ambos cayeron y aunque la mayoria de sus marcas estan en zonas que las ocultan, me gusta mas esta version donde son algo mas visibles (y mirando ahora mi comentario siento que suena mal o morboso... O me da esa sensación)

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      1. NightArt on Chapter 2 Wed 25 Sep 2024 07:13AM UTC

        Fang having a broken wing is a pretty obvious tell of what happened, and it's a needed one since it really felt like an excuse that the original Torn Fang didn't have any visible scars from the fall (since I hadn't pre planned for it at the time, and retconning 10 other chapters for it felt lame), so I'm glad I can make it clear from the get-go this time around.

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