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1. ACautiousCat Tue 01 Oct 2024 02:52PM UTC

   

   Nooooo, this is lovely! This was so sweet and poetic! I felt so much meaning with each section, and how Sanji's mood progressed from childhood to adulthood! And it's such a great premise that makes total sense! I love the moments you chose, too, especially connecting Sanji's tattoo to Nami's! God, that makes such perfect sense, I'm upset that it's not canon! well, now in my head, it is...!!
   This was definitely beautiful writing!

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2. 1. lilaliacs Tue 01 Oct 2024 03:04PM UTC

      

      thank you so muchhh!! the nami scene snuck up on me, i wasn’t even planning on writing it when i opened this google doc, but then it was so OBVIOUS!!

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