This story was hilarious! I really enjoyed the names of the different heads of the runespoors. The fact that the Dreamer and the Planner have rid themselves of the Critic’s troublesome presence seems like a good thing—at first. But we soon see that without the Critic’s careful questioning, the Dreamer and the Planner are lost. I love how you turned this expectation on its head, and also how you showed that even too much healthy food is too much food—and can have disastrous consequences.
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inmyownlittlecorner on Chapter 3 Fri 11 Oct 2024 02:08AM UTC
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