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  1. Pillowkind on Chapter 10 Sun 13 Oct 2024 02:29PM UTC

    AAAAA I am so excited about this story!!! New perspectives!!! I am jumping with joy!!! I love all the interactions with the Lights, the way The Narrator is so uneasy about them is really great, he just gets bossed around. The Barbarian is really really cool!! My favorite Light so far has to be The Utilitarian, but all of these girlies are super cool!!!

    Also, The Barbarian keeps mentioning poison???? What is that about, I wonder 🤔 could something be poisoning the well? Mudding the waters, hindering perspectives? Was it poison that separated The Shifting Mound and The Long Quiet? So they could be caged in the cabin? Jk I'm shit at predicting these kinds of things 😅 it's probably an expression of confusion or something. Anyways, I keep thinking about this because I really enjoy this story!! Thank you for sharing your writing!!!! I'm putting your characters to spin in the microwave (my brain) <3

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    1. eyitzme on Chapter 10 Sun 13 Oct 2024 03:33PM UTC

      Aww, thank you so much! It's great hearing that people like my writing, and this comment made my day. Thank you for reading!

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