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  1. watarnaro (Guest) on Chapter 4 Thu 24 Oct 2024 08:05AM UTC

    this was genuinely such a good read!!! incredibly well written and super investing, i couldnt put it down when i started for a while lol
    everything feels super in character, you definitely understand the characters super well ^_^ i could visualize everything here so vividly so yeah!! tldr. fantastic work
    ash is my fav pokemon character and i find SO many fics where people get him so. SO wrong but you really did it so right here i feel!! i also love that you wrote delia a bit different than canon but she still feels very in character which i find so so many fics do wrong too (but is more understandable since she isnt so prominent past OS). but the fact you even did THAT right tells me alot!!!

    i also am so glad you picked riolu for him because it just fits him so well, the fighting drive, the energy and childish wonder and friendliness
    ive only seen a few fics do it AND write it well so im super glad to have found one here lol

    will be watching this one!! (i bookmarked it in my browser)
    cant wait to see more!! <3

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    1. PizzaSpino on Chapter 4 Sat 11 Jan 2025 11:40PM UTC

      Sorry for taking so long to reply. Thank you very much! It can be difficult trying to nail a character that isn't yours, but I try my best. Thank you for checking out my story, I hope to keep you entertained. Currently working on the next chapter.

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