Omg you just made my night can’t wait to read it. I love how you portray her thinking and the constant call back to heat it read back so well. I love reading Zuko interact with her and what he’s thinking, it’s so endearing. I was giggling when he thought she was crying but in reality it was just to hot for her.
Oh gosh, this really means so much! I love writing Xuan and Zuko's thought processes—she's a bit too straightforward and uncomplicated in her thinking, whereas Zuko is a bit too overdramatic and sullen. I'm hoping to convey that the thing they share in common is that they're both incredibly earnest and diligent, perhaps to a fault. It's really fun having them clash and grow, and I'm excited for the next chapters when they get a better understanding of each other.
Thank you again for this comment, it really spurred me to pick this back up :D I was so happy with your comment that I ended up finishing the next chapter, so it's up now, albeit a little shorter. I hope you enjoy!
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