wow, you totally understand the fucked up relationship these two have. Curly can't even seem to fathom it being apart of Jimmy's personality, that or he willingly chooses not to see it. the way they met in school is funny but also follows pretty well, with Jim making it so that if he can't have it, no one can. Jim POV is perfect for this and I really appreciate the little sprinklings of his mind in his observations, like Curly's stupid smile and the paranoia. also holyyy schnikes the docking. awesome writing!
Thank you so much! I hoped to capture the tension they share in game, that sinister back and forth where Curly drags his feet and Jimmy, who should be all too eager to push him overboard, finds himself just as hesitant to go through with it.
The smut scenes are total self-indulgence. There's not enough docking out there methinks.
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