I binged this whole series (so far) in the past 2-3 days, while my school put on our Greek Mythology themed play (I was feeling inspired lol). And this series is so good !! I haven’t been 11 or 12 in a while, but I feel like you’ve been capturing Percy’s youth wonderfully. He really does feel like a kid, not like the hyper-competent battle-ready warrior he was forced to grow into before he was ready. Also, I love the concept of Amphitrite (basically) adopting Percy as her own, and selfishly I hope your endgame is somehow Amphitrite/Sally, though I do think Paul is still a good guy.
I was blown away by how big your brain is by 1) having Amphitrite claim Percy, not Poseidon, 2) having Luke and Lee go on the quest with Percy instead of Annabeth and Grover, 3) having Luke get sick right before they left (and his descriptions of being sick (specifically mention of poison) make me think maybe Silena poisoned him so she’d go on the quest instead of him? But why is my question) and 4) killing Silena. I thought for sure Lee would die because I think he died in the books? (It’s been a hot sec) and I think Michael took over as Apollo cabin counselor until he died too (?) and Will took over (??), but also with Silena’s involvement with the titan army I think (again it’s been A While), I was sure it’d be like Her choice to become a traitor or not, and/or her and Luke being the ones yet to be traitor(s) and break their chain(s).
So like holy shit (/pos) in general. Love love love this so far !! Please take your time writing the next chapter, like I don’t want to pressure you or anything, but I’m very excited for it to come out when ready !! Don’t be discouraged by writers block !!! 🫶🫶
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Mateo3700 on Chapter 5 Tue 10 Dec 2024 12:21AM UTC
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