Th characterization of Portia and Archibald are so perfect for me, and the way they communicate on this scene was just chef’s kiss!
I think you were able to paint a wonderful picture through Colin’s confused eyes.
And yes, I always appreciate a story where there is no: Marina was my cousin line.
Never a dull moment with the Featheringtons. Colin will have a bit of a wake up call that will give him a better understanding into the whole family. A crash course, if you will. And I love that for the both of us.
Should we start a "not her cousin" movement? I am fed up with that notion that is so far away from the truth.
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