Ink is definitely not a kid. He’s just incredibly immature and makes everyone think he’s a kid.. He’s trying, I guess. Dream and Nightmare definitely can be seen in that way! Nightmare acting like Error in a way — tantrums and what not — is something I wouldn’t be opposed to seeing. It’d be funny. Dream, whilst he wouldn’t throw tantrums, might have that immaturity or childlikeness, and I love that. Two old grandpas taking care of a bunch of mortals, (and then Ink’s there too…) it’s funny.
It is quite hard, as two immortals, to properly take care of mortals. Both the Bad Sanses and Star Sanses are incredibly unhealthy in their own ways — they all have things they need to work on.
I completely agree. I love them more than anything, they’re perfect just the way they are! Or, something like that, I guess…
I love the difference in how people write Error. It’s interesting to see. I completely just make him some overgrown manbaby who throws tantrums. It’s fun to write. I love Error. Fun fact: He was my first ever favourite along with Ink and Nightmare. I’ve grown, though.
That’s completely understandable! Some people just don’t believe he’s in the gang, and that’s okay. I like the fics where he is. Frankly, I prefer them. He does have quite the role.
Mm.. Spoilers spoilers.. It’s a cute(?) chapter, I think. At least, some moments are cute. Not finished yet, I’ll finish it at some point. There’s a bit more I wanna add..
Ink is not a kid, but recently i saw couple of awesome fics of where he is :3 'He's trying' more like making everyone miserable without even realizing it- That little demon doesn't even know he's one. And his morality.. is questionable for sure In my opinion, Nightmare is like Error, but more.. knowledgeable?? Like Error is just being Error, a manbaby who thinks he deserves the world- or worlds- just to destroy them. And Nightmare needs and wants to actually have knowledge on things to use it against his opponents? something like that i suppose
Well, now that i think about it, we see the apple twins as grandpas right? Then Ink, technically, is one too. Just the more energetic one?? Not sure how to describe him correctly as he's everything at once.. Both good and awful.
I love Errors and Inks typical interation though.. Ink is just trying to make Error his friend, while the other just wants to kill him without even realizing Error was doing that. It's great-
At some point Swap was my favourite, for no reason at all- And no, not the 'cute uwu sweet baby', the determined badass Blue- I love Him man-But i'm sorry Pookie, Error just gets a better feeling 😭😭
I also like the dynamics when Cross is with the stars, it's a bit different. But around 90% of it, is Cream- Not like i dislike the ship, but i think it's kinda overused by now ngl
Cute(?) chapter... hmm... We'll find out once it done then :> (I finally hit 21k words- i keep deleting the draft and adding the rewritten version 🙏🙏 It takes so long to scrap the draft and the rewritten version back together srsly)
You are very right.. He is making everyone miserable but, uhm.. He's.. Trying! Let's give him the benefit of the doubt, huh? His morality is.. more than questionable, that's for sure. I completely agree. Nightmare is like an older less manbaby Error. They're both gods, technically, aren't they? Soo...
I think Ink is that fun grandpa that has some... questionable morals...
I love Error & Ink's interactions as well. They're a fun duo and I'd love to dive more into their personalities and find a way to write them.
Swap being the favourite is valid. Dream used to be my favourite, like, forever ago. I prefer determined badass Blue as well -- not the "Blueberry" that a lot of the fandom settles for.. Not saying I hate "Blueberry". Just a personal preference of mine~
I love it when Cross is with the stars as long as it's written well. I love Cream -- but usually -- if Cross is written with the Stars it's solely because of Dream, and that's unfortunate.
It is finished. :) It's been posted.. Cannot believe I only posted this fic 11 days ago and yet I'm already four chapters in. Crazy, huh? I bet it does.. I'm excited though. 21k is a lot!?? :D
Maybe he is trying.. who knows? Not me. And I don't think he needs the benefit of the doubt. Even if we did tell him, he would forget it in like not even a day, so is it even worth trying to tell him? Don't think so- His morality? No. No comment. I don't even wanna know sometimes what's going on inside his head. Like I'm already writing one, I don't need to know how other Inks mind works thank you very much!
And ye Error is a god, Nightmare is a guardian, but both are immortal so i guess your point stands. But in my opinion Error is a god is because he can literally erase whole worlds, while Nightmare just has to spread negativity doesn't he? Like, I've seen fics where Nightmare is somehow more powerful than Ink and Error combined somehow. No idea how did that happen
Error and Ink are very fun to write, like you just gotta write one more on the 'stupid' side of the spectrum, and the other on the'impulsive', and you're almost done.. But now that i think about it, again, Both are acting childish in their own rights. Imagine living in a Multiverse where the gods of balance are acting like children.. Yea.. I can see how that could end. Totally not saying i read other fanfics and know that. I would never.
Blue, Swap, Sans. Whatever the name, it's good for as long as it's not Blueberry- Same here, just a simple preference, but not even gonna hide the fact that i pity the people who prefer the CuteBerry. I'm sorry to people who really do that :< But seriously.. H o w. Tell me your ways.
True, true. While the concept of Cross being with the Stars sounds plausable.... The one where he's still with the gang, and having secret affairs with Dream sounds just as good. Imagine, that you have a boss right? And you're in love with his brother. And your job is in the mafia too, so you're screwed if someone finds out. And on example, there's a rat called Killer who somehow will just know out of nowhere, and blackmail Cross to get something out of it. Don't mind me being specific, just read a few and this is the first thing that came to my mind-
I don't think i can read it right now... I have all day free tomorow though :) Being sick once every year (when your immune system is made of steel, but the doctors say the opposite🙏🙏) so I will check it out tomorrow! And dang.. It really goes on so fast huh? Just imagine how far you'll grow in a couple of months! I'm sure a lot of others will enjoy this as much as i do ;3
21k of something, that makes no sense whatsoever, It sounds more like a prequel, and I might even make it one for a year till i actually start posting actual chapters instead of one shots.. Way to torture your readers.. Like it's how Ink one day just appeared outta nowhere, somehow has a soul, even if it's explained in the fic how (It's not yet TwT) and how he has a personality disorder that was written poorly.. I will just add tags that it's a crack fic i guess, even if it's really not- Just gotta rewrite 7 pages out of 40 already rewritten and then write another 10 by the looks of what i have planned.. Nice
I don’t think so.. We don’t have to talk about his morality at all.. Ink’s mind is quite the terrifying place to be honest,,
Error is a god & Nightmare is commonly regarded as one, even if he’s not. He’s powerful, but not as powerful as Ink or Error.
Yeah.. Error and Ink being the main forms of balance besides Nightmare and Dream isn’t exactly the.. Best thing. They both act like overgrown children — it’s just one of them is an overgrown man-baby and the other is an impulsive, forgetful idiot.
I agree. I don’t like “Blueberry”, personally. It’s like the mischaracterisation of Papyrus himself, but god it’s even worse from what I’ve seen.
I completely agree! That’s how I like my Cream. Killer would be the fall of everything unless Cross somehow manages to convince him not to say anything..
No rush. :) I’ve been so busy these past few days with exams.. I hope you’re feeling better today!! I hope so ~ I’m excited. I’ve been dared to write a one-shot, so.. That’ll happen at some point.
You’ve got this!! Don’t rush it or anything. I’m sure your readers will be okay to wait a bit !! :)
And you're telling me that??? Im writing an Ink, even if in the fic there's not much of his thought process, i have the whole way of his mind planned to the brim.. yea It's an interesting place for sure..
Nightmare might not be as powerful as Error but he's still great :>
Ah yes the Forgetful Squid and egocentric manbaby... Yea the balance is screwed- Not like it wasn't anytime before anyway, one of them even is the size of a Child too.. I still love both of them though 😭😭
Blueberry.. I think i need to bleach that thing out of my memory.. i've seen memes and some video's about it where it's an angry biting dog... Yeah...
Ngl the set up where Killer just finds out without even digging or anything, he just seems to know is so common and so cannon by now yet never gets boring
Good luck with the exams though! You'll need it ngl, i know some certain exams are.. less than pleasant, so i Hope you'll do good!
I wonder what type of one shot.. some angst perhaps?? Good ol' angst could do us all some good, trust me!! I'm sure it'll be great, dont you worry, one shots arę very fun to write, i starter writing 2 couple od days ago and they should be located right after the main one for plot-holes lmao
And yep, i've decided im making it a prolog, and i even got some ideas for the main story.. but mostly to get myself a break and stop trying to expand the fic do it isn't like too long. Its already too long, so i need to make another work according to that fic in chapters.. better an annoying plan than no plan at all i guess
It really is huh.. I gotta take a chance at writing Ink once.
Exactly!
Yeah, the balance has always been screwed. They try but.. It doesn’t really turn out the best most of the time, huh? We do love them though!
I agree. I don’t ever want to have to see Blueberry again.. A menace to the UTMV fandom, really.
You’re right! It doesn’t get boring. When I see it, it’s usually done very well, and I love that. I like when it’s done well.
Thank you ~ Last exam of the semester is today, and then I’m on winter break. Everyone rejoice, yay! More time for writing ~
Hehe. It might be a bit angsty.. I’m only around 600 words in so far, I worked on it a tiny bit last night, so it won’t be out for a while but it’s a work in progress~ It’s not necessarily something important to this story at all. It’s just something I saw on Twitter that inspired me to write it!
Oo, that’s awesome! Yeah.. At least you have a plan. Don’t worry, you’ve got this!! I’m excited for it. :)
The Balance.. I'm not even gonna comment too much on it- Depends on the Multiverse like fgoc or fgod or some normal, or where both don't care about the balance, it's a very big variation of Error and Inks, so it's either skewed in one way or another, and if not those two then the balance of Negativity and Positivity.. Read: It never turns out in the best of ways- But we do love them and honestly sometimes it's our fault if those Multiverses die, cause we are kind of the creators who trash talk Error in his own head.. How does he not get a headache most of the time i'll never know
I can't wait to see more of those ngl, the simple, classic set up, that would be written in a different way.. Maybe one day I'll find a better fic than ftfo.. Or not. I don't know what could possibly beat it, It's like, the most iconic, if not one of the most popular out there- But it's just soo good.. It hits differently
Dang, am I the only one who doesn't have their exams just yet? Like every single one of my friends online has em every semester, couple of months or on each end of school year, where i don't- i mean i will in the next 3 years ina row, but it just seems so unfair-
Ooo, can't wait to see it then! Wonder who will it be about?
Literally just cause i started writing other shorter one shots so i wouldn't forget, my mind doesn't know what to get inspired at, so now i am not writing any of them, can't tell if it's nice or nah- I still wanna try to get the long ass 'prolog' posted before new year though, maybe a few days after tops, if i won't then i probably lost motivation or was busy doing something else
While having a plan is nice, It's still not exactly good yet, it will change a million times before it even starts to get written so yea-
Oh and i wanna rant about my auto correct on my phone that i was writing the comments here today- Like, the e keep changing into ę, or the for to do, or some other random things that doesn't make sense, cause they aren't exactly english words or just don't fit the context right, and i can't turn it off either, since it's like connected to my phone, and whenever i try to turn it off it just turns back on so i have to deal with that thing, one of the few things i truly hate seriously 😭😭
I have exams every semester. First semester ended, now I’m on winter break..
Hehe. My friends know, I had them vote on what I was going to write. (I had too many ideas, needed to figure out what to do.) I also was going to write a Star Sans Poly oneshot for Dream’s birthday (sorry Nightmare, my friends wanted me to write Dream…), but I don’t know if I’ll be able to get it done in time! ):
Aw): I understand that. Yeah, don’t do too much at once.. Good luck on the prologue ~ Very exciting to hear it might be done before New Years. :) Don’t worry if it isn’t - Take your time.
I mean, hey.. A plan that needs to be tweaked is better than no plan, I think?
Autocorrect is annoying. I’m a fast typer, so if I don’t take my time to type, then my words don’t exactly come out how I planned for them to… Gets some super funny moments though, trust me. Autocorrect is dumb..
Sorry for the super late reply to this!! Yesterday was super busy!! Agh..
But seriously, I feel bad for all of those who have them so often, I feel luckier than ever that i don't though.
I get the too many ideas part.. You don't know what to focus on, And don't worry either about not writing in on time, he can wait- We could call it a late Birthday present, it will be worth it, better to check it out and edit it if needed, butttt, if you're a patient person (unlike me) then you could just wait a year to post it.. But only if you're so patient honestly, i wouldn't be able to wait for so long just to post smth i wrote a year prior
About the long ahh prolog, like, right now, I'm stuck on a little tiny part, that it's not even a quarter of a page. And i have no idea how to rewrite it with what i wrote literally 10 minutes ago- That's 1 scene away from the longest scene probably AND maybe the last that i have... a lot to write about. I just don't know what should come first, so it'll take prob a couple of hours to figure out.. And yes, i will try to post it around new year, i will try not to chicken out, imma just give it some crack sometimes taken seriosuly sometimes not tag and i should be fine
Plans. I am AWFUL at planning. And that's saying something. And i'm going to a school that planning is a major aspect in my future profession- But this is definitely the closest to planning than in a long time, So yup, even a horrible plan is better than none at all
Autocorrect is just trying to put the words in the language it was used in.. Where we are typing in english and it completly changes the meaning. It MIGHT be funny, but it gets so much worse when it turns into a normal word in your language, where in english it's kind of offensive- You're so lucky too when someone just doesn't know what it means, But yea it's something that could be a very amusing blackmail attempt. My spelling is also not the best, often had to reread everything i wrote just to check my grammar and spelling, and i randomly find a typo that i didn't see before so i just get annoyed-
Dwww, I don't mind in the slightest, like sometimes my mind would just tell me not to type anything yet, not even a reply or anything, and sometimes i'm just busy doing something else so yeah, i get it :3
Yeah.. They’re pretty crappy. It’s okay. Unfortunately, you get used to them after a while. They’re over now for me, so I’m happy about that :)
A late birthday present.. I might be able to get it out by New Years, maybe. A one to two week late birthday present for Dream!! I am way too impatient to wait for an entire year.. Trust me.
You’ve got this!! Take your time and what not. No rush~ (´ω｀♡)
I’m pretty bad at plans too, but I’m trying to get a little bit better.. But hey, like I said, a bad plan is better than no plan. At least you can learn from said bad plan to make a better plan next time!
English is such a confusing language for no reason. Might be my mother tongue, but I still struggle to remember words off the top of my head. Autocorrect just makes it even worse.. When I’m just typing completely normally, I swear, unless you’ve been friends with me for a while it is a bit of a struggle to understand me. Oops.. Autocorrect doesn’t help!
I get it I get it ~ I’m the same way. Sometimes I don’t respond for a bit because I either need to think about what to say or I’m just.. Not feeling like responding. It depends. Other times I’m just busy..
Also, also, do you have any socials or anything? Might be a weird question — just asking because AO3 comments suck a tiny bit for conversing.(because I always forget what I say. It’s a mess to have to go look back at what I said before..)
Good they are over then, yah? I'm happy about that too!
Yep, late birthday present work, i mean what is 1 or 2 weeks in like 52 weeks or so?? Yea almost nothing, and i would probaby post it mid year if i wrote it at that time rather than wait, it just feels so wrong to wait so many months just to post a one shot-
Maybe i'll get better at planning once a bit older, or the complete opposite.. ehhh that's future me's problem.
It is a VERY confusing language, but i feel like learning my language is worse for many other speakers- but it might be just me, but like there are so many ways to say a letter in different words, or the exact same way but you need to pay attention to the context. Alright- You don't know how bad my grammar is when i try to message my sister, literally the only time my autocorrect won't save me just to humiliate me T-T
Honestly, most the time my excuse for not responding to anyone, no matter the person, is my tired ass, and since I'm tired i'm automatically bored, and i need to wait a few hours till i am 'awake' again, when i actually feel the humour from things, rather than read something i would normally giggle at blankly- Other times I'm just like 'nah, not right now.' as another automatic response
Uh, I only have discord, and tumblr that i have no idea how to use except how to search and like things so not many- I get whacha mean, but for me it's easier 'cause i am on ao3 or wattpad a lot, and yea 40 comments just to have a few of conversations- as interesting as this method is, it is kind of tiring sometimes lol
Never in my life have i used twitter, like ??? how.
Yeah, I can't wait until next year to post a one-shot for Dream's birthday... Way too impatient.
English is... Something, that's for sure. Autocorrect always tends to humiliate me, I swear. There are so many examples of me sending something not related to what I'm meant to be sending just because of autocorrect. Maybe that's partially because I don't read over my messages before I send them, but oh well...
That's completely fair. Sometimes it's just not the right time to respond and that's okay!! :) You don't always have to respond immediately, of course.
I have zero idea how to use Tumblr. We're the opposite there, though. I'm mostly on Discord... Maybe because I talk to most of my friends, even IRLs on there, but that's not necessarily important.
And don't worry. Twitter is a scary place, I wouldn't suggest it to anyone...
I mean.. You could prepare somethign for next year lol
I will never understand how english works. If i didn't pick it up at like age 9 then i wouldn't be here and be like the rest of my classmates clueless- Autocorect will always be an enemy. Even if it helps, cause it doesn't help enough- That's why exactly i read over my messages, sometimes before and sometime after i send them to correct something that irked me
Well, i don't rlly use discord for IRL purposes, atleast not anymore. Like last time i used it with someone i know irl was when the online lessons started. Mostly friends i know from the internet, which is actually nice. Like i like the variety of people, different languages, traditions etc, it's great, i like to learn about other people ngl, so maybe we could add eachother there? I use it often, like very often-
I never even wanted to check twitter out man it's scary..
I could... But I'm too impatient to wait to upload it.
That's so real. English is such a confusing language, especially for non-native speakers... Autocorrect rarely helps me... It's something. Sometimes it helps me, but not usually... I usually just forget to read over mine, honestly. I'm getting better... Sometimes.
I use Discord for literally everything. Most of my friends are from Discord. :) If you'd like to add me there, it's the same user as here!
Twitter is terrifying. Do not check it out if you'd like to keep your sanity, really. Trust me..
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