Comment on The Blood Of Brotherhood

  1. AxleYax on Chapter 1 Sun 22 Dec 2024 08:17AM UTC

    Thanks for the advice! I'll try to keep that in mind for future chapters, and I'll go back and edit the ones I already posted when I have time. My writing style is definitely influenced by books I've read like Fablehaven, where paragraphs are rather long, so this advice is nice to have! (Also, can I add that the example you used is glorious? 10/10 example. That's gonna go into my favorite quote library for sure.)

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