yayyy the team assembles!! this was a lovely chapter and it made me laugh so much. you've captured everyone's distinct voices so well and I especially love how you write Lae'zel, she's hilarious
it's fun to see Kestrel's writing woven throughout the story and get to know her thoughts about all these weirdos (and Scratch, he's the only normal one.) "I’ve only just met Scratch, but if anything were to happen to him, I would turn into a mind flayer and kill everyone here." DAMN RIGHT. protect that sweet boy at all costs ❤️
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