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  1. Loloquera (Guest) on Chapter 1 Fri 27 Dec 2024 04:22PM UTC

    Please continue it! I really appreciate Shadow's internal explanation since I felt the talk in the movie was somewhat forced and with this new approach I am really enjoying it! (English is not my first language, sorry)

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    1. GreenChaosEmerald on Chapter 1 Fri 27 Dec 2024 04:41PM UTC

      I am working on the next chapter right now! I really tried making the flow of the conversation flow more and tying that to how it relates to Shadow's character. Thank you for reading :)

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