So excited as always by your writing, plus the concept plus 39 chapters! I really loved how you wrote that unseen period between Abyssinia and welcome- it felt very real and rich and right for the characters. Trappers fear about the Sea of Japan killed me! Also really loved the interactions with klinger and radar and the rest of the camp. The introduction to Louise and their relationship was also really interesting and thoughtfully done. Thank you for writing!!
Thank you so much! I had such a fun time on the sort of weaving that's going on all throughout this chapter. That kind of poetic language (or going so far as to break into lined poetry in a couple of things I've written) is one of my favorite things to do and I'm so proud of how it turned out in this.
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