First of all, the concept itself is great, especially for someone like Tangle, who’s about as happy go lucky as you can get. Seeing her absolutely destroy in the name of justice feels so satisfying. That crowbar tail thing was genius, by the way.
I can’t wait for the next chapter. I see we’ll check up on Whisper which will be welcome. I’m super hyped for the Whisper/Tangle elements, which we already got teased in this chapter, so hopefully we’ll get more of that when we see how Whisper is faring.
Okay, so there’s a lot of loose ends and questions I absolutely need answers to. Why did Jewel leave the Restoration in ‘disgrace’? What made the Neo Diamond Cutters split up? What did Whisper do to betray Tangle to have such a long lasting effect?
I like Charmy’s appearance here, by the way, and the way you describe all the characters is awesome. I hope the Chaotix get out of debt bc they deserve better tbh. I love the way you wrote the fight scenes, it felt so vivid and awesome, and I flinched every time Tangle was so… violent. Like jeez. She needs a goddamn Snickers, and probably a hug. Though I do like how she lost her stomach just a bit after beating Scald half to death.
Amazing writing, great concept, and excellent execution. Can’t wait for the next chapter, and Kudos!
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