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  1. FREEDOM_STANDO on Chapter 1 Mon 20 Jan 2025 06:10AM UTC

    F*cking hell, quite the start I see.

    First off, it is rather... nice, to see how Anon's Mum dis something here instead of just being the usual trophy wife status and actually helped Anon to move from RB to VB, wonder what kind of stuff happened in the first place. For what we know, Anon suffered the whole bullying business, that didn't change, but I reckon the whole doxxing event never happened here, and Anon almost f*cking dies doe to some crackhead trying to stab him? Good Lawrd that's hard to see, but I'm happy to see that Mum at the end, helped Anon to change schools.

    Also, dunno what kind of thing happened with Mia here, for her to just attack Anon on sight, but we can have some speculations for her behavior, and it seems like she ended up losing Ben, due to some skinnie in a robbery, or a Skinnie killed the poor guy, that would explain why this hatred so intense directed towards Anon for the single reason he is a 'umie, not to mention other possibilities.
    Also, Nick saying that Mia lose someone important is quite worrisome I say, that pretty much confirms that, Ben is either dead, or maybe Naomi is dead as well, that would make some kind of... problem, if you will, that maybe Fang did something too but I guess this line of thought isn't exactly realistic, since I doubt the hand of fate put a 'umie right into Fang's path, so at the end she did the whole E1. Could be the case, let's not forget anything can happen.

    And with that same thought, seems like Anon had a pretty good relationship with his family before, his Mum was a pretty good mom, taking care of him, and his dad as well previous to his military service, where he changed a lot but for worse, and that is remarkably sad to see.

    In the end, quite the story, I like how Nick started throwing hands against f*cking Mia, without hesitation? I guess so, since the f*cking Parasaur was already a walking problem to begin with, judging by the reactions from the people around the beating Anon received. Also, he ended up mumbling that last part I reckon, wonder what kind of reaction Nick make right there, or if she's gonna joke around when Anon wake up (if for some reason she's around), or when they meet again in the future, who knows.

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    Cheers for the Fic, mate.

    I see potential here, not only because the story has changed a lot of what we usually see, but there is a good amount of hidden Lore to be expanded too, not to mention, this whole thing happens a year before the canon event, right in the middle of July, 2019, I see.

    Hopefully the story will continue, until then, cheers again, for a First Fic, the quality is remarkable. I won't say is Book Caliber, but very close, since is quite easy to read and you don't get tired, visually, from it.

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    1. Munck on Chapter 1 Mon 20 Jan 2025 05:05PM UTC

      Thanks matey!
      I hope I can continue to keep it interesting!
      I'm planning on having more of a focus on Downtown Volcaldera, so that'll be fun to play around with.

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