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  1. CHAPTER 3 YAYAYA HERE WE GO <3

    "Shirabu might as well give up trying to hide at this point. Not that he’s intentionally hiding."
    yeah sure buddy keep telling yourself that................
    can't believe he's playing volleyball by himself all alone on a rooftop. the image is... way too sad.

    "Besides, it’ll irritate Semi further, which is the whole point."
    SUCH a brat for real lmaooo

    "“Fair enough,” Semi acquiesces with a sigh. “But they would’ve found out eventually, and Goshiki would’ve found out a way to follow you anyway. He’s stupidly in love with you.”"
    i mean, yes. if they hadn't found out then it would be even worse??? semi and shirabu just randomly disappearing?? ???? PLEASE the squad would go insane. instant rescue operation
    ((also the part about goshiki makes me cry. so true semi)

    "The last thing he needs right now is rejection on top of the frustration he’s already experiencing."
    PLEASE if he asked him semi would combust LMAOO

    "Shirabu turns to look at Semi fully now, frowning. Semi looks back at him, expressionless."
    oooh the mental image is strong with this one. i wish i could draw because I See It.

    "You’re stronger than your fears. You wouldn’t let anything hurt Goshiki, not even yourself."
    UGLY SOBBING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES TELL HIM SEMI!! shirabu keeps constantly putting himself down, it's insane. i mean i knew he wasn't doing well in the awakening but the full extent of his trauma sure is something else now that we have his POV... so glad that semi is here to at least attempt to talk some sense into him.

    "He knows Goshiki’s strong. Not as strong as Ushijima, maybe, but he’s definitely not weak."
    that's not a fair comparison,,,, ushijima is Mr Miracle Boy himself.......,, though with the speed goshiki has been rushing through the academy, he would have been their pride and joy if it hadn't been for ushijima haha

    "“What patience,” Shirabu mutters, enjoying the flash of annoyance in Semi’s eyes a little too much."
    JSHDBFDJFHG he's SUCH a brat oh my goddd i love him sjhdfbg

    "Shirabu tries to withdraw the shadow but forgets to unravel it from Semi’s wrist, so it just causes Semi’s arm to fly upward into Shirabu’s face."
    AJSHFB i shouldn't be laughing but all i can think of is him using that in a "why are you hitting yourself" kinda way when semi annoys him too much

    "Shirabu has hit the roof on his back, Semi fallen against his chest"
    GAY. GAY GAY HOMOSEXUAL GAY

    "Heat begins to crawl up his face as Semi remains frozen, his face inches from Shirabu’s. His heart is racing"
    LET'S GO SQUAD LET'S GOOOOOO

    "Semi, who other than sitting up, hasn’t moved."
    semi do NOT overthink this. shirabu is just a prickly little cactus, you know this. do NOT,,,,,,,

    "“No! You fucking tackled me!”"
    i'm giving him a very judgemental eyebrow. you tackled yourself using semi

    "Tendou’s missing too, but Shirabu figures he’s with Semi."
    yeah like 100%, these two come in a pack, frequently bought together, do not separate-

    "Ushijima stands by the stove, making dinner."
    i never considered this but man whoever is on cooking duty has to cook for 8 people at once. damn. their pots and pans have to be biiiig dhjfsb

    "Yamagata smirks. “I’m pretty sure you watched more than few episodes with me, Taichan.”"
    PLEASE ALL THESE NEW NICKNAMES JSHBFHDBFJG

    "There’s a whole list here! Bless the author of this book."
    every student ever when they find the solution to a homework in a book........

    "Like knowing a name on the tip of his tongue but unable to remember it."
    oh my god...... what if his demon parent is nice.... what if he used to have a demon name...................

    "“Nobody will die,” Ushijima says with such confident certainty it’s easy to believe it’s true."
    i absolutely LOVE that about this team. the easy way ushijima installs confidence into everyone just by being confident himself. the sheer amount of trust there... stz BEST BOYS!!

    "“I believe I said the enchantment correctly,” he says, beads of sweat evident on his brow."
    leon working overtime for everyone

    "Yamagata leans back in his seat. “SEMI! TENDOU! STOP HAVING SEX AND COME EAT!”"
    LMAOOO thanks for the update <3 cannot believe semi had a gay moment with shirabu only to go "ok im horny now time to find the guy who can actually do something about it"

    "Semi knows he should probably feel guilty for using Tendou for sex to distract himself from the memory of what happened on the roof with Shirabu, but Tendou’s always so delighted to oblige that it doesn’t really feel like he’s using Tendou at all."
    I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT'S LITERALLY WHAT HE WAS DOIGN AJHSFBSJHGB

    "Whatever Tendou might say, Shirabu doesn’t want him."
    i KNEW he would overthink it!!!!!!!!! tendou please an intervention is needed. we can only deal with so much teenage angst and shirabu is hogging all of it right now

    "can even sense when he’s feeling a particularly strong emotion such as after one of his nightmares"
    one of these days it's going to be an overwhelming amount of love while he's looking at semi. @ god (sy) are you listening!!!

    "Semi’s the only one who can afford it"
    rich boy semi is still so fundamentally funny to me. he really could have had the nicest, cushiest life, instead he had to fall in love with the two most difficult guys on the squad AJHDBFSHG

    "“Mm. Do you think this is the approximate size of Ushijima’s dick or should I look for something larger?” Tendou asks, holding up a glass cylinder.
    Semi’s face burns. He quickly pushes Tendou’s hand down. “How the fuck would I know that?” he hisses, immediately distracted from his morose thoughts."

    I AM LAUGHING SO MUCH AJSHGBDJFBSDKJHBJSDBHJHAVDFGH PLEASEEEEE
    but hey 10/10 effectiveness, it worked great as a distraction

    "“See, this is exactly why I think you should reconsider my idea of a threesome.”"
    AKDJFASKFJADKJGNHKJNKABFDJHGBDFLJBHADKGJNHLAENGBHJGJH
    this is what tendou's dreams are made of

    "Semi scowls but can’t really refute that either."
    at what point is semi going to pick up on the fact that tendou is almost never wrong about other people. like. of course you cannot refute it. it's objectively true sdfjngjd

    "He won’t even let me apologize for whatever it was."
    why is he trying to apologize for something without even knowing what it is???? SHDBFDJH shirabu would be so mad if he did that

    "Semi takes that away from him too. Honestly, it’s like shopping with a child."
    I! LOVE!! THEM!!!!!!!!!!!

    "Two demons step through, identical aside from the color of their hair (one blond, one ash gray)"
    AJSHDBJHBGJDGD MIYA TWINS CAMEO?? cant believe we're finally getting the stz vs inarizaki match we were denied of in canon <3 i remember how tendou said he hated the twins DHFBG

    "“Don’t think you’ve got the right realm. Hinokoku’s a few meters west,” Tendou says, his voice light."
    i love his blasé attitude so much you have no idea. yes tendou go make your enemies mad for no apparent reason <333

    "If he distracts him, Tendou could lose."
    TENDOU ISN'T EVEN A FIGHTER DIDNT HE LIKE SPECIALIZE IN WARDS AND DEFENSE!!! [insert several siren emojis] EMERGENCY!! SQUAD THEY NEED BACKUP!!! where are leon's walkie talkies

    "The glass doors of the storefront shatter, as a massive ball of golden magic hurtles into the blond demon, sending him flying across the store, tumbling over the counter to disappear behind it.
    Ushijima strides into the store, Goshiki and Shirabu flanking him."

    fashionably late and a killer entrance, too. NICE
    OH MY GOD THE ENTIRE SQUAD CAME!! that's so cute ueueue, i can just imagine shirabu bursting into the main room like "GUYS SEMI'S IN TROUBLE WE NEED TO LEAVE NOW" and everyone follows no questions asked

    "“Return to your home or be sent there by force,” Ushijima says flatly."
    not to be that person but i get it now. i get it, tendou

    "Semi’s eyes widen, and his eyes go down to his foot, which is still throbbing with pain. It must be clouding his mind, because he completely forgot that condition of the Bond."
    HASKJFBSJADBFGHA????? i forgot, too. i thought shirabu meant like 'it hurts me to see you hurt' and i was like wow. Character Development. NEVERMIND THOUGH that would have been too quick ndfjbg

    oh shit semi's foot is gone for good. does anyone have healing magic, is that a thing in this AU......

    "Due to the severity of the injury, it takes a couple minutes for the magic to heal it."
    SHIRABU CAN HEAL TOO??? FUCK JUST HOW DOES HE EVEN JUSTIFY BEING EVIL AT THIS POINT!! YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN USE THEIR MAGIC TO HEAL OTHER PEOPLE!!!!

    "He can’t say that he lingered because Shirabu felt so good underneath him, that his flushed face looked so pretty, that Semi had felt an overwhelming urge to kiss him."
    pspspspsps yes you can....... you can, semi..... i believe in you............

    "Across the Bond, something shivers."
    YES!!!!!!!!! YESSSSS TODAY WE WON!!!

    "Semi doesn’t have time to register what just happened between them, because his immediate thought is of his friends inside."
    MAN WHAT THE HELL KIND OF CLIFFHANGER. so glad i got here late because now i immediately have the continuation DKFJGBFDJHG

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    1. pls i want to inject your live-reading comments directly into my veins they give me so much life i love them and i love you akfjhkjhgh

      okay i do want to talk about a couple things in this!! you're right, tendou put down for his career path that he wanted to be an artist, so he's really only a Demon Hunter because his friends are :') he keeps them safe with his wards. he does know how to fight, and his magic is actually really powerful, he just prefers to play support rather than offense. he's a good boy your honor!!

      and yes there is healing magic in this AU! it's talked about a little more in i think Igniting Fires? (the Seijou fic) basically anyone with magic can use it for healing, but it takes a lot out of you. most of the time, Hunters and witches use healing stones (first mentioned in Origins, the kuroken fic) which are special rocks infused with healing magic by enchanters (which are those who specialize in enchantments, like what leon did to the walkie talkies, infusing inanimate objects with magic to serve a specific purpose). that way they can just carry them along and say the incantation to release the healing magic from the stone onto the injury and bob's your uncle.

      healing without a stone takes a lot of energy; the worse the injury, the more energy/magic it takes. to heal without an incantation is practically unheard of since Silent Magic is so difficult. so yeah, shirabu is something special :')

      and yes, that's exactly what shirabu did to get them all to the shop to save semi and tendou hehe

      EDIT: not sure why your comment posted on chapter 2??? i think the extension needs a check up ahaha

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