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  1. gk (Guest) on Chapter 1 Wed 19 Mar 2025 12:34AM UTC

    Super introduction to Runa. So much bottled up inside. Def not giving herself a break in any way. This is not a big intro but we already know a lot about her - her self-consciousness and self-loathing. You write very well ... loads of insight (interiority is super important for getting readers on board and you nail it) on what makes Runa tick ... and not tick well. I'm sold; gotta continue!

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    1. Intrige on Chapter 1 Wed 19 Mar 2025 05:08PM UTC

      Thank you so much gk :D I'm glad you like it!

      Last Edited Fri 28 Mar 2025 12:05PM UTC

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