That last few lines there are so important. From from the beginning he commented mentally about how codependant she was and this was like a full circle moment with them being hers instead of her having to depend on them. Powerful stuff and great writing! I've been binging all day and I've just really loved this.
Thank you so much! The last few lines were actually one of the first pieces I wrote. I wanted to see Dani really grow and come into her own strength through this experience.
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