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  1. Trex (Guest) on Chapter 2 Fri 04 Apr 2025 05:13AM UTC

    Fun fact, I found this fanfiction on fanfiction net, and it’s also how I found out about the armoured core field game franchise very interesting. I love what I’ve seen so far and I’m gonna be commenting for all the story(not every chapter well, I will give long comments on how I felt each chapter and character arc went and give constructive criticism when I can. I do it with every fanfiction I love and I love this one.) these two franchisees seem to go together. I hope that the drones can make one human friend who doesn’t suck with the show I wish did in real life. on this chapter you did very well. You got all the characters mannerisms to a T, I love how quick thinking was Uzi in the last second when she realized what was going on when they were falling, it shows that she could be quick thinking outside the box 📦. Everyone here does and says things I believe they would say if they’re in the situation. I can’t wait to see what kind of character arcs our main heroes/still kind of villains go through.

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