Comment on Disventure Camp 6: Hollywood Stars

  1. Murphy_Wesley_Bliss on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 07:46AM UTC

    Reminder, the intro for this one was a place holder. Lol. I dind't want to spoil everything from minute one, since you can picture the plots more now after the chapter.

    Fixed the spelling erros. lol

    The fire is mostly for show yes, but they were ready incase something went wrong, Emily hitting Issac was 100% acidental. lol

    I think you meant Joey instead of Kenny. lol

    I loved the jokes with Alexa and Joey. Having the whole story planned out helps with writing, since this is meant to be lik TDI, first impressions, but teams change as time goes on, same with drama!

    Also gave a big giveaway to why Bray is the "strange" one.

    Lily being an animatronic, but NO ONE knowing that is funny to me, and Buu being Alexa's wing girl great.

    Making survivor jokes is a fun gag.

    Like I said, tried to get diffrent reactions, and teased multible things that come back!

    what makes this cast funny is almost half of the cast is really random, giving off WTF vibes, before you see the layers, since we have 25 more chapters with this colorful cast! lol

    Ad yes. Having a nigirain man, hispanic, russian, half scotish, two irish were me trying to make the cast more diffrent in apperance then s3, more detail too!

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    1. Godjacob95 on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 05:28PM UTC

      Aw yes yes now I remember so fair enough XD and hey good to see expected some would slip through so no need to stress over it~

      Issac seemed to take it in stride through so suppose Emily is off the hook XD. And yeah I am not above slip ups myself typing to my bad lol

      Yeah Alexa and Joey had a lot of standout humor, which is saying much given how many characters have good humor this cast, and yeah Bray living up to his title XD

      Buu and Alexa are BFF vibes already and hey I appreciate those gags like the Survivor one.

      Different reactions are welcomed, and yeah this cast very much feels like your spirit; a set of more generally quirky players on the surface, but with some solid depth to them beyond the madness.

      Yeah the diverse cast is very much appreciated the more the better and it helps the general lineup here stand out, so say you did wonders!

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      1. Murphy_Wesley_Bliss on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 05:32PM UTC

        I tried to play up a "scary girl and Damien" Vibe with Alexa and Lucas, but a bit more funny since she's just scaring him (for now. lol)

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        1. Godjacob95 on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 05:36PM UTC

          Yeah I say this is a much improved take on Damien and Scary Girl, for one thing Alexa is only being funny and never actually puts his health at risk like Scary Girl did and we do get more hints of her depth beyond just her creepy surface demeanor so they rub off each other well even if Lucas is still spooked lol they were a highlight to be sure.

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          1. Murphy_Wesley_Bliss on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 05:37PM UTC

            I mean she plays off as wanting to see violence, but that's from the hosts, not her. plus it helps not make you worried that she works with kids. lol

            Also finally did another greeting! WOO!

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            1. Godjacob95 on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 05:47PM UTC

              Hey just saying you enjoy violence is different from actually beating people up or chasing someone with a jackhammer lol but her having a sincere side and good with kids shows depth and adds ironic comedy.

              Nice! Will check it out ASAP currently working on a comment for another Fanfic I am following so once I finish that will check the Greeting ^^

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              1. Murphy_Wesley_Bliss on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 05:49PM UTC

                I teased Lily might be supernatural, but to then show Alexa just made an animatronic makes it more funny, since she does collect dolls.

                and most of Mint team being baffled that Issac openly picked Alexa a great joke.

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                1. Godjacob95 on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 08:51PM UTC

                  Yeah I do think it is a fun subversion, when the doll begins to move a bit you expect Alexa and Lily to just be supernatural like Nina but then the reveal it is automated is a fun little rug pull that honestly makes Alexa more unique.

                  Yeah that was a surprise, but it is touching someone picked Alexa so early rather than the weird girl being the last pick. Embracing her spirit rather than be scared of it which Issac is sweet for.

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                  1. Murphy_Wesley_Bliss on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 09:12PM UTC

                    A detail I like is Reagan likes Issac, but his quirky nature tires her out quickly. lol

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                    1. Godjacob95 on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 09:17PM UTC

                      Yeah it was cute, could see a few sparks of affection among some of our budding pairings, should be fun to see how her feelings for Issac despite her being annoyed at his word-slippage play out they do have fun chemistry.

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                      1. Murphy_Wesley_Bliss on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 09:26PM UTC

                        The real intro will be next chapter, since it focuses more on the teams then gender. lol

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                        1. Godjacob95 on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Apr 2025 09:27PM UTC

                          Oh I am eager to see what the real intro looks like now that the teams are revealed should be a bit of fun~

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