Comment on Broken Stitches

  1. In the games when the blood is dried it seems to be red (based on DR1) just like how blood in our world would darken and dry brown instead of red there it goes from pink to red. I can see how that wasn't written very clearly though. Perhaps that's something I need to make clearer in the future because I know I have referred to dried blood as red a few times in the book.

    Feel free to point out mistakes, it doesnt bother me at all! I can always go back and edit published chapters at any point so any glaring mistakes can be fixed if they're pointed out. I'm pretty sure there are a bunch of grammar and spelling mistakes I missed when editing since I write on my phone quite a lot if I need to write and don't have access to my computer. It's honestly helpful having mistakes pointed out because I know I have probably made lots of mistakes (especially in later chapters where I forget what I've already written). Your comment was very sweet and is appreciated 🥰

    Yeah, I was writing daily for all of last year and have been planning it for even longer. It really consumed my life for a long time but it's been a fun project. It's weird not writing it daily anymore but it's fun editing older chapters now and remembering where things started.

    I'm glad you enjoyed my interpretation of Izuru, I'm always unsure of if people will like it because I know it's heavily influenced by my own interpretation which probably doesn't really match the canon 😂

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