Comment on Rito's corrupted harem (Cancelled)

  1. 1412kaito on Chapter 14 Wed 11 Jun 2025 06:31PM UTC

    I thought I'd focus more on romance this time. Run became a singer and TV star because she wanted Rito's attention, and he's going to give her that attention. Of course, he'll have to convince her to work for him as a spy against her twin brother Ren. Plus, she's one of my favorite characters.

    How's he going to do that? I don't know, I just write whatever comes to mind.

    Btw, I don't know when I'll be able to write again because... well, "Death Stranding on the Beach" is coming out soon, and I'd like to play through it in peace.

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    1. Hidden-eye (Guest) on Chapter 14 Wed 11 Jun 2025 06:35PM UTC

      Uma última coisa, você pretende matar o Ren?

      Mesmo que a Run ame o Rito o irmão dela praticamente nasceu com ela, então eu não vejo ela concordando em matar ele, espionar eu até enxergo, mas matar? Não mesmo.

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      1. 1412kaito on Chapter 14 Wed 11 Jun 2025 06:41PM UTC

        I toyed with the idea, but thought it would be stupid to just kill him. So I thought: He's always so obsessed with being better than Rito. Why not show him he's wrong so he can finally learn, to leave Rito and Lala alone forever and maybe return to his home planet?

        But that's just a theory. I can think of something else, maybe.

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        1. Hidden-eye (Guest) on Chapter 14 Wed 11 Jun 2025 07:11PM UTC

          Se essa ideia seguir, que tal no lugar de uma humilhação, uma despedida amigável, o Ren não é um cara ruim só é idiota 😑

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          1. 1412kaito on Chapter 14 Wed 11 Jun 2025 07:28PM UTC

            That's right.

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            1. Hidden-eye (Guest) on Chapter 14 Wed 11 Jun 2025 07:31PM UTC

              Contando que a irmã dele esteja bem, eu não vejo ele indo buscar problema com o Rito.

              Sendo que o próprio Rito, teria que tipo de pensamento já que ele também se importa com a irmã.

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              1. 1412kaito on Chapter 14 Wed 11 Jun 2025 07:33PM UTC

                Yes, that's why I spare Ren. I mean, I'm the little brother, but still, if someone hurts my big sister, believe me, I'm a savage sometimes.

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                1. Hidden-eye (Guest) on Chapter 14 Wed 11 Jun 2025 08:48PM UTC

                  Que tal arrumar uma garota para ele? Tipo, no capítulo anterior teve apresentou aquela garota.

                  (Ps: não vejo problema algum em criar novas personagens pra história)

                  Eles poderiam arranjar um encontro pra eles, e quando os fossem pro quarto, adicionar um pouco do soro na bebida deles e pronto! Finalmente feliz 🌟

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                  1. 1412kaito on Chapter 14 Wed 11 Jun 2025 09:12PM UTC

                    Do you mean Katase? Hmm, that's possible... I'll see what I can do, but instead of the serum, I'll have them both drink an aphrodisiac. The serum is only for Rito's future girls.

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