I listens to the song before I read this (at the recommendation of what it was based on, not just randomly lol) and I love how you do easily mixed little bits of the lyrics in the story, like chocolate chips in the cookie doughy is this sweetness.
Idk why but the line "He pulls away again, and shoots me that irresistible smile. I just want to kiss it again, taste and savour it like a fine wine." Made me smile too.
This was cute and even the love making was kept classy. Good job writing this!
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