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  1. “It’s good for us to be around common people.”-- I like this dialogue! I could hear her saying that, and I like how you mention how insulated Link was living in the forest. I'd never really considered these things myself when playing.

    "...he can do it in the castle until you must do your studies.”-- Aww, sigh, king!! What a buzzkill 😔

    I really feel Link's listlessness again here. Like, what the heck is he supposed to do with his time? I like that little addition where he jumps down a hole and sleeps there.

    I love the idea that the cuccos are laughing in all their ruckus. And I love the distinction you make where Link prefers Malon over Romani.

    I remember going a bit crazy over cookie dough in my young adult years because I never really had it as a kid, lol. So I can genuinely relate to the milk thing.

    I wonder if Malon will cheer Link up. She seems like a beacon of light right now.

    Lovely chapter, kudos!

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    1. Thank you again for such a great comment!

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