Bah. Some of these sentences -- I just have to sit with for a second to digest. Love your way with words: "The sound settled into the quiet like punctuation." Sooo good. Love this tender unwrapping. Making me itch to write!!!!!!
This means so much — thank you for taking the time to sit with the words and let them land. That sentence in particular was one I almost cut (isn’t that always the way?), so hearing that it resonated really hits home. And if this lit a little spark for your own writing, then I honestly couldn’t ask for more. Go write!! I’ll be cheering you on from here.
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