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  1. GrindyVine on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Jul 2025 06:51PM UTC

    Ouch... Yeah it's still as miserable as two previous chapters. Levi and Celia are just your "first impression that get sidelined but at least they gave a good introduction"

    Few I'm wondering in this hopeless AU is stratos and Delilah (especially stratos since he's a big guy, probably being a carriage), acolyte and Venus (she's a goddess, I mean... There's no way right? Or she's just chilling in secret?), mothiva and zasp (both are equally curious, mothiva with how her annoying antics, personality, might have disappeared when she uhhh got slaved, zasp because he's a traitor of the wasps sooo that's not good for him), the termites (either they all shut themselves back, or hoaxe just found them), and asthotheles (since wasps took everything, and wasps also happened to be the bandit's former ally, how would he be in this new world?). I really like this concept, and seeing every characters being miserable is just... Wow.

    Overall, short chapter but similarly as ouch as both chapters before

    Last Edited Mon 14 Jul 2025 07:02PM UTC

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    1. Termistae on Chapter 4 Mon 14 Jul 2025 07:45PM UTC

      There's something I'm kinda curious about though I don't mind obviously, why did you say two previous chapters when this is the 4th chapter, not the 3th?

      Also, I do got plans for those two explorer teams you said but they got very different fates than Team Maki or Team Celia at least with what I'm imagining for now. Team Slacker's specifically being a lot less bad than either of them simply because they didn't do anything to directly oppose the Wasp King in the entire story so he just doesn't care about them enough.

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      1. GrindyVine on Chapter 4 Tue 15 Jul 2025 01:43AM UTC

        I uhh don't count chapter 1. It's more of a introduction, than anything. Chapter 2-4 is where we get to read the bad aftermath of the wasp king. So that's why I said two previous chapters.

        And well good to know for slacker, not sure how bad mothiva and zasp would have it, I can imagine it myself but not sure if it's that that 'explicit bad' for them, so I supposed I gotta wait. And also for the rest, especially Venus too. She's top second aside from team mothiva

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    3. Scarabrain on Chapter 4 Tue 15 Jul 2025 07:49AM UTC

      I think mothiva would be forced to perform for the wasps entertainment, and also be forced to 'perform' for the wasps, as in something very graphic and explicit, super no no. Don't know about zasp, he won't do slave work with the fact that he's a wasp too, maybe he'll be forced to watch, Idk, since they have canon romantic relationship anyway. And what is worst than cuckolding?

      Last Edited Tue 15 Jul 2025 07:50AM UTC

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