Not ONLY did the paladins switch bodies, but the lions did too! I like it, having the lions deal with it too, I was expecting to have the paladins all struggling with a lion that isn't theirs, but this adds a whole new element to the body swap! Very nice, very cool, very interesting. Having the lions described a pride and black specifically a she, oh I'm weeping I adore that, such subtle and cute world building! I really enjoyed the roll call bit when everyone was answering from each others' bodies and the various different dialogue tags you used for them, all mirroring their personalities and state of mind. Again, a wonderful detail that just adds such a nice, human element to the story! Can't wait to read more!
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PrincessOfDragons on Chapter 1 Mon 13 Feb 2017 06:44AM UTC
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