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  1. "Chloé struggled to hide her shock as Lila spoke. She stared at Lila for a long moment, realizing that Lila was being completely serious about that. Not only would that get Marinette expelled, but it was possible that Marinette might face criminal charge for both the theft and for breaking into the school.

    It would definitely ruin Marinette’s life."

    Jeebus, it sure would! I was kinda wondering what Lila would plan to raise the stakes, and damn did you nail it! Perfect 'I did not see that coming, but shit i really should have' scheme.
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    "The very last thing Chloé expected to happen next was for Marinette to spring out of the bushes surrounding the fountain, cell phone in hand and an equally smug smirk on her face as she announced triumphantly, “I got every word of that on video.”

    asdjasdjas Girl you gave me a heart attack and I'm on the other side of a screen! You're lucky Chloe didn't jump halfway to the sun X'D Excellent work grabbing that on video though! Good backup for the recorder, having two different sources of the same material.

    (sidenote with the fic title for this month I am 100% gonna have the Kpop demon hunters song running through my head every time I open a chapter, and I think that is very appropriate X'D)

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