That was fantastic! Edie was such a complete character, so smart but still so niaive, and I loved the way both brothers reacted to her. I would love to see a sequel!
Ah, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and you got where I was going with Edie's character. I love writing kids, and I have to resist making them all geniuses, so I was going for a realistic level of smart for her age, but as you say, still naive. Thanks for reading and commenting! <3
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