A new chapter! This story is so good. I really like how you write everyone’s internal monologues. Jason is really twisted up with the Pit madness and reality. It was kinda crazy of someone (Bruce) to leave a photo like that, but we really can’t expect him to express himself normally. And poor Tim wouldn’t know a good familial relationship if it hit him in the face. Not him saying he has a great relationship with his parents and doesn’t get why Dick wants to talk to him everyday. Dick speaking to hallucination Jason (halluci-Jason) is so sad and I’m suspecting will come up again when he finally meets Jason again face to face. However it all plays out I’m excited to read more! Thanks for writing and sharing.
Thanks so much for commenting! I'm trying to keep everyone's narration distinct with their voices, which has always been a struggle as I write multiple POVs/characters. Also Tim gives SUCH avoidant attachment vibes, which will hopefully change when (if) I ever get to his coming home arc. I hope you like how this progresses!
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