Comment on Poppy Playtime Saved AU: How Angel save us from Hell

1. Guest (Guest) on Chapter 3 Sun 24 Aug 2025 01:22PM UTC

   The story seems promessing so far, so I'm adding it to my list.

   The only complaints I have so far are that it's a little difficult to follow the story when the narrator switches from first person to third person and vice versa without warning, and that the genderization of objects interrupted my reading several times because I was like, “Wait, what? Who are they talking about?” cus I throught there was someone with the protag.

   But if we overlook these two things, the fic is still good ! Keep the good work, lad :D

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2. 1. Dragonfly34_writes on Chapter 3 Sun 24 Aug 2025 01:33PM UTC

      

      Hi! I'm glad you added my fic to your list.

      As for your complaint, I understand that you have trouble following this transition between first and third person. This is my first fic, and I had this idea of ​​using first and third person, but I can start writing in a way that you'll start to understand.

      Thank you so much for the insight (and the criticism; criticism is always good because it helps me).

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