Sorry but there still seems to be a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes for this being an edited/updated version. I'd suggest maybe finding a beta reader or editor to help clean things up in the future?
Hey so I wanted to apologise for my previous comments. I just got frustrated and lost sight on why I am writing these stories. Thank you for the advice I appreciated. I also updated it again to be more cleaner.
Your comment however, really insulted me, and put me down. They may not of been your intention but that how I saw it. So I am for finality because I am not coming back to this story, this is the edited/updated version.
Sorry, I wasn't trying to be insulting; I just thought a beta reader or editor could help you clean things up further. Your authors note asked people to send specific examples of places that could be corrected or improved, and that's part of what a beta reader's job is.
I figured as much, and it okay. funnily enough I vented about your comment and others in a discord server I am in. Found out a friend of mine also writes fanfiction and offered to be My beta reader. Ordinally I never wanted one because I have trust issues and such, so it sorted now.
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