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  1. Asterije on Chapter 5 Tue 26 Aug 2025 07:01PM UTC

    Ugh, a new chapter! I really enjoyed their conversations and explanations about A and B from a scientific perspective. I also really like that Towne and Barry have a kind of "exclusive" relationship, with their glances and touches. It was also interesting to learn about Cisco's history, but I'm not sure if the alpha was your original character or someone from the canon. Can you tell me? I'm very glad that you decided to expand this fanfiction, as it's a unique idea of an unaware character trying to adapt to the world of the Omegaverse. My favorite moment in the chapter is when Barry says, "Insane is automatically excluded from all leagues," and then looks at Towne.

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    1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 5 Tue 26 Aug 2025 07:49PM UTC

      Don't worry, the alpha was an original character, there just to be doomed by the narrative (and be used to convey yet more worldbuilding aha /o\).
      I'm glad I decided to expand the original fic too, it's proving really fun to write! I hope you continue to enjoy it!

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