Comment on A Tale of the Lost and the Unworthy

1. ElsieLouiseMoore on Chapter 55 Mon 08 Sep 2025 12:27AM UTC

   

   Also, in regards to Grace’s past. I’ve been very careful not to info dump as facts like that don’t tend to be thought of often. As this story is third person but from whatever character named at the chapters beginnings POV, I’ve very much relied on their thought process to progress the story.
   When it’s a part of your everyday life, it just is. There is no reiterating something like that in everything you do. There’s definitely a sadness which follows you which I’ve attempted to web thoroughly into Grace’s character. I’m glad it’s come across well now and that the character is liked before, thank you for noticing the effort. :)

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