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  1. sarahnoya on Chapter 4 Sat 13 Sep 2025 04:56AM UTC

    Mrs. and Mr. Changretta are couple goals!
    Luca is the best kind of trouble.
    While Luca's parents don't hate Autumn, I think Mrs. Changretta won't approve at the beginning because the age gap.
    I guess Tommy's first plan to get Autumn back failed so he will kidnapp Kate?

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    1. Funnygirl00 on Chapter 4 Sat 13 Sep 2025 07:40PM UTC

      That they are. It breaks my heart every time that they're separated. I had full sympathy for Tommy until Mrs. Changretta wouldn't let Mr. Changretta. And when he said, "I love you forever"... I was broken.
      At this point, they see it, but don't want any more trouble.
      That'll be in 'Ultraviolence'. This is a short one, but I will be uploading 'Ultraviolence' next. I expect more drama and complaints like in 'Habit's'. But I'm going to switch things around and have Luca be the darker one, so we shall see. Next chapter is up!

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      1. sarahnoya on Chapter 4 Sun 14 Sep 2025 02:29AM UTC

        Luca as the darker one sounds interesting😏

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        1. Funnygirl00 on Chapter 4 Sun 14 Sep 2025 03:22AM UTC

          Oh, it'll be interesting. He'll almost be like Thomas in 'Born to die' but he'll be a lot less thoughtless than Thomas. He'll actually ask her if she's that she's not hurting before going ahead anyway.

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