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1. J04_ST3V3 on Chapter 1 Mon 22 Sep 2025 11:35PM UTC

   

   With all due respect, that Law and Luffy nonsense was unnecessary, it was completely unnecessary, it would have been a thousand times better if you focused only on Luffy x Hancock.
   And if you wanted to create a love triangle, then include Uta or Marguerite.

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2. 1. atunymayonesa on Chapter 1 Wed 24 Sep 2025 05:52PM UTC

      

      Es mi fanfic y yo decido que escribir, si no te gusta pues simplemente no lo leas y listo.

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