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  1. BFG_blueapple303 (Guest) on Chapter 4 Fri 26 Sep 2025 03:27PM UTC

    Though she seems pretty sure if herself. Will she wonder why it doesn't match the vision/memories? Like will she see their new jewelry keeping gwima at bay? Or hiw patterns dudnt show and how jinu helped her stand up abd not acting like a jerk?

    Defi itly going to guve her a interesting instead to jinu by comparing him a bit. Like will it naje her realize afain that jinu baited the girls to attack them the first time? Will she check if demons will appear in the bathhouse? Will she think he got memories to like she did? Or thonk he still doesn't know?

    Will she try to look them up....like if they don't go on the game show.....or will she notice they have a actual backstory on sicual media this time which seems different?

    Wll they connect the sane or different i wonder. Like rumi knows she cares abd he sacrificed himsekf and wants him to ve free properly/not dead....but she also knows he did betray her and gwima has a tight grip on demons and they did hurt people.....and rumi asked him to help sabotage the saja boys bkth becayse she wanted to give him a opportunity to escape gwima that didn't involving jinu destroying the hunmoon/taking souls since she knew his motive was the memory's kr at least ti get away from gwima's influence....like shebekieved he made a mistake and that he could be saved....but she did extend the offer to try to guarantee success/use him back. And while sincere did choose to share her backstory with him to get something traction and make him believe he coukd be good. While the boys are trying to make a impression with survival as a goal first abd foremost.. if jinu doesnt connect with the action of hiding her patterns during the battle I wonder wgat will happen....

    ....like....tmdo they know she is half demon yet or just think she is a hunter? Will rumi hide the memories that she got and her half demon status from them still and play along with them if they try to approach the huntrux again? Since the boys want to make a good impression to lower their guards before approaching about how the hunters could help. Not that she knows that is their motivation yet since baby was a jerk to her.

    Will rumi get annoyed and Zoey saying its love eyes?I ship it obviously but it does simplify the complex emotions sge was feeling toward jinu a bit...or is Zoey exaggerating for fun? Like they back rumi up but will they tease rumi that maybe mister blue hair had a semi good reason to think rumi was creepy even if they know she isnt.

    Considering rumi doesnt know what what the necklaces do and the like...will she think jinu is still under the power of gwima and diesnt know who she is? Like she has the memories now...and WE know jinu got some and the boys are toeing the line of the saja plan to survive but rumi technically doesnt have a sign the boys aren't still working fkr gwima.

    She now is not clouded by hate and cares about them(or at least jinu) but will she think jinu and the rest might still be under gwimas sway abd she will still need to stop them so they don't hurt anyone? Like all those demons in the bathhouse? That she might need to convince them to not side with gwima? We know they don't want to work with gwima anymore and are throwing their lot with rumi knowing something to help but last time she thoight she git through to jinu...jinu still did the tajediwn and tried to kill people...so it might not be that easy to convince them if she doesnt have something solid to protect them from gwima. I mean WE can tell jinu's plans are different because he helped her stand up but since not everything is one to one the same anymore like the names.....she could assume they might just have better tact.

    Will she tell Zoey and mira they are demons? Or about the vision she had? Will she tell them about herself beingva demon? Or will she be scared still?

    Like we know Zoey and mire accept her eventually....but they dud raise her weapons at her before. Taje diwn was in her head, celined trusted them to protect rumi while knowing and rumi still has the pattern/habit of holding back. Even with the memories that popped ot her head.....telling them would still be risky and nerve racking....will rumi tell Zoey snd mire or dely it a bit when its scary to come clean....like they will calm down but she knows there will probably be some upset. Will rumi connect her voice problems to what the tonic guys said since she just left that doctor? Could she use the doctor's advise to come clean? Bright side is she has a concrete way to fix her voice. If she tells Celine the situation on wonder how Celine would react.....like could she get Celine to back up that sge is rumi and not a imposter if sge came clean to the girls?

    Though she could probably be honest and prove it by summoning her weapon.

    Jinu is going to pout so hard his plan was going well and the girls or at least Zoey might have talked after. Just to him to faint. At least the fans didnt see.

    I wonder if rumi will find out jinu despite making plan so effortless looking last time ...will see the dude put a ridiculous amount of thought and planning into things.

    At least rumi blends in with the fans right? Matched the auntie....I wonder if the choreography is the same....like did she notice them not making actual hearts this time? Did jonu still pelvic thrusted a older lady away? Or are people a bit calmer since they aren't using more demon magic?

    Hmmm....will jinu bring out any other memories in other people? Will the boys be concerned about the draining sensation and try to keep them from touching next time? Though jinu mostly froze because gwina went quiet....woukd they want to touch her hand to see if that works? After all the necklaces can only last so long right?

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    1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 4 Fri 26 Sep 2025 06:12PM UTC

      Whenever you comment it makes me weak how long they are lol (not in a bad way mind you). I'll just reply as a whole here.

      Rumi did notice it. The BRACELETS I mean. I got a little confused when you mentioned a necklace. Anyway, she did notice them but she has a lot more on her mind to think about other than that so it wasn't like she was really conscious about it? Like, think about you noticing something in the corner of your eyes but it doesn't really register, not yet at least.

      As for Rumi having flashbacks. Well, hers is more complete than Jinu's, and that would actually be explained later on, I have a plot point dedicated to that, I don't know which chapter, probably depends on how long each chapter would be (like, I'm usually around 1.5k but the next chapter will be really long, probably double? I dunno, I'm only just halfway through). All I can say is focus on the tags lol, Time Travel and Time Travel Fix-it. That has always been the central part of this story but I can't say more than that for now.

      This story was actually all plotted and there are scattered plot points in my brain that I just need to write out and polish. We'll see more of Rumi's POV and realization next chapter and maybe the next one too? Depends on where I end it by the next chapter really.

      The choreography is pretty much the same because the Saja Boys are magicians! (Brought to you by Zoey ❤️) But they haven't seen the whole actually since Rumi was reeling over it before.

      Anyway, I really like long reviews since they are signs of readers enjoying it. Thank you.

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      1. BFG_blueapple303 on Chapter 4 Fri 26 Sep 2025 07:25PM UTC

        XD glad I got across my appreciation. your fic gives me alot to mentally chew on which is alot of fun! honestly I tried writing bracelet but my autocorrect kept changing it so I gave up. I don't even know why. I definitly spelled it correctly. Very excited to see what you come up with. and YAY more Rumi POV in the future! going to be fun to see what they look like from the outside when others don't have the context we do. Zoey's magician theory being brought up is always a win :)

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