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AN: Hello! I am trying to do a lot with this piece, so feel free to rip it apart in any way you can think of. No feedback is too harsh. This is intended as a short story, but I recently let a friend read it, and she thought it should be the opening to a novel. So, please let me know your thoughts on that front. I’m also interested in thoughts on the ending—is it too rushed? Do you want more? Do you want less? Specifics would be greatly appreciated in this area; was the buildup to the ending earned, and how/why (hopefully that makes sense)? I feel that in a general sense, Ludicrous. might be kind of rushed overall, but working on it after a while started to make me anxious, so I did what I could. I’d like to hear your thoughts on this as well. (also, feel free to chop up all my long sentences as you please. i'm a little heavy handed, but i generally consider it a part of my style of writing.)
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