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2018-12-04
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This is about you

Summary:

Bob Barnard confronts Stella Rose, hoping that in doing so she'll step aside. Unfortunately, she is much more conscious than he thought.

Notes:

I would have loved to see more scenes about Bob and Stella. They are basically two sides of the same coin.
I'm an aspiring screenwriter and this is my very first English, out-of-the-closet work. So every kind of feedback is welcomed.
I know people are not used to this format but I hope you'll gladly read it regardless.
Hope you like it!

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

Work Text:

INT. BARNARD'S HOUSE - EVENING

BARNARD reluctantly welcomes STELLA ROSE in.

BARNARD

Let's make it quick. Bob could come back at any minute.

STELLA ROSE

You should just have called me then.

BARNARD

This has to be done in person. (pause) 

Bob and I will coach Roxy for regionals. Together.

A beat.

STELLA ROSE

Well, that's very nice of you, telling me this.

BARNARD

I think it's better for everyone if you move past this without freaking out.

STELLA ROSE

You didn't worry about me when you talked to Roxy.

BARNARD

Because she deserved to hear the truth from me.

STELLA ROSE

If you had been so thoughtful 20 years ago...

BARNARD

Look, I know what I did. But I'm leaving my mistakes behind

and making progress. Which you clearly seem unable to do.

STELLA ROSE

Progress? You're more hung up than you've ever been.

BARNARD

You don't get it. This is not about me.

You need to accept that you have nothing to do with Bob anymore.

Just move on.

STELLA ROSE

Have you said that to Bob's wife too? When he left her?

Silence.

STELLA ROSE (CONT'D)

He didn't leave her, am I right?

BOB BARNARD

Our relationship is none of your business.

(leading her to the door)

You should go now.

STELLA ROSE

You know, I've not always been like this.

(pause)

I gave him my life, only for him to toss me aside when I demanded to reciprocate.

You think you're different. But your entire life revolves around him.

So open your eyes before it's too late: this is about you. Because I've been you. And you'll be me.

 

That is how Stella Rose decides to leave, smiling as soon as she turns around. Barnard is frozen.

 

Notes:

So this is it. I feel like it's a little bit off - maybe Barnard is too weak, or I couldn't let the emotional pain emerge? However, I don't think that Bob would have been completely open and honest to Stella, so I wouldn't feel comfortable with any other scenario.
For the ending, I was inspired by Chris Colfer's "Struck By Lightning", which I strongly recommend of course.