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Hey guys, thought I'd give a little bonus page and share some fun facts about this story.
This story was first created on 17/11/21
Before we begin, here were the dates that each chapter were posted.
Chapters:
1+2 - 7/1/22
3 - 8/1/22
4 - 11/1/22
5 - 16/1/22
6 - 18/1/22
7 - 22/1/22
8 - 14/2/22
9 - 13/3/22
10 - 18/4/22
CHAPTER: 1
Being completely honest when I began writing this I never actually had an excuse to why Baxter made the substance to begin with, I was going to try and make it complicated, but that was to much for my brain to think, so I took and easy way out by saying "turning into humans, but they keep their human strength"
I actually have a written version of when Bebop and Rocksteady enters Baxter's lab, I'm unable to provide what was said right now, but when I find it I'll update this.
CHAPTER: 2
I didn't even mean to make that chapter just be Bebop and Rocksteady, it just sort of happened.
CHAPTER: 3
to this day I still don't remember what I was meant to say in the notes
CHAPTER: 4
I don't think there was really anything different of this chapter, nor anything intresting
CHAPTER: 5
I'm pretty sure this was the shortest chapter out of the lot
CHAPTER: 6
This story was thought out in my head, so I never wrote it down like how I originally planned it. Luckily I remember how it went. All this writing in chapter 6 was never in the original version of this story.
Originally Shredder, Krang and Slash ran into Tokka and Rahzar on their way to Baxter's lab. I realised that it would've made the story shorter when typing, so I added this part.
While I was writing about what the ooze stuff did to mutants, I nearly forgot that Baxter actually hadn't seen what the effects are. So to cover that up I used the "don't judge me, I know what I know" excuse.
CHAPTER: 7
I did actually have a better written version of this in my head the day before writing it, but I forgot a lot of this chapter
CHAPTER: 8
I mainly added Scrag so that he could gain more attention from the fandom, since him and his gang crew are like forgotten characters.
I tried to provide "emotional" vibes through this chapter, but I don't think it really worked :/
When Shredder grabbed the files I was going to say all of the members names and appearances, but went against that since it would've been not needed. I'll show you what they would've been.
Dumbo:
Age: 28
Sex: Male
Height: 5.4ft
Eye colour: Brown
Hair: N/A
Dopey:
Age: 28 (and a half)
Sex: Male
Height: 6ft
Eye colour: blue + brown
Hair: black
I'm not good with height, fight me.
CHAPTER: 9
I wanted to try and make chapter 9 slightly more violent then the other chapters. I had a better version of when Rocksteady rammed his horn in Bebop's stomach planned in my head, but when I wrote it I forgot about it.
CHAPTER: 10
Ah the last chapter. I know I know, its a bit plain since it was all a dream, but that was just how it was going to end. And it took over being the longest chapter.
When Shredder leaves the mutants with the eggs there was two different ways this went. one of these were while they were examining the eggs, Scrag would've drooled on Dumbo's head, this causing him to grab an egg and say " We'll find out" and he'd throw the egg. The original version was that Grunt woke Scrag up and showed him about the eggs. Scrag then would've jumped down and examined them (since he is considered the leader of the group)
You will never know what that file Krang was trying to download was hahaha! (it was cat videos)
Other stories:
"Even"
"Even" was probably my second favorite story to write, yea it was basically hell for your eyes to see when I first published it, but now it has been upgraded to more of a better visual appeal.
A comic version of "Even" can be found on my Instagram - elizatheduck
An easier way to find it is to search "#madnesscombattrustcm" since there's less post for you to scroll through.
"Zach and the alien invaders, but different"
I wasn't expecting that story to get far, it was more of a "what if?" Scenario, even though it didn't really change the plot. I still do wonder what could've happen if they pretended to be aliens.
Also I'm aware now of how things work with Wingnut and Screwloose (I found it about a month ago). It was panel from the Archie's comic, and yea I know how it works. Ah well.
I'd like to thank everyone who read this, now I honestly don't know what to do, this was a fun journey to experience, I don't know if I'll make something as good as this or write another story in general, but if I don't, I appreciate all of you and thanks for taking time out of your own hands to read.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask.
I know this isn't the best TMNT story on this website, but it is something I'm proud of.