Love this. The way you write in the character reactions and thoughts in between the canon battles and events make this fic unique among the ones I read. With other fics I've found myself scanning though the canon events instead of actually reading, yours I read every word of.
Thank you for using more than two squadmates for the kett facility raid. Doubly so for combining both the rescue and destruction option.
Only critique I have is; the way you bounce from one characters head to another can be difficult to follow as the reader. I do this myself sometimes, I've found reading my chapters slowly and aloud can help me find the sticky parts.
Still, love the story and eager for the next chapter whenever it's finished. Bookmarking for now! <3
Thank you for leaving your lovely comment. This story is so out of my normal bag of tricks, that I find it very challenging to write, so when someone lets me know they are enjoying it, it makes me feel good about trying to write it. I also wanted to thank you for the tip on how to keep it from getting difficult when bouncing around in everyone's heads. I will try that before posting the next chapter.
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sarcasticMage on Chapter 11 Sun 16 Dec 2018 10:43PM UTC
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