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Hey everyone. So I am working on editing this story on a massive scale. Fixing grammar issues, to flow, to even making it more descriptive. So with that, I've decided once each chapter has been updated and the next one has been posted to catch up to where you guys have already voted for. I will not do what I did before. Aka, giving myself three days to write it before posting. Chapters will come out organically after the voting period of five days has passed.
Now it isn't being updated because I hate it or just because of cc conected to a character. But more of, when I went to reread it. It held many tiny mistakes I should have seen. See back during when I started this with such ambition that I still feel for it. I was living in a truck, and typing on my phone. Which was part of why I was so active with writing during that time, I had nothing else to do. Now I have time, and a more clear mind to realize things I had planned for the story weren't implemented the way I wanted, and the story isn't as meaty or descriptive as I'd like. Mostly as I want you the reader to get the full experience of how Technoblade is feeling, and seeing.
On top of that. I don't know how many of you read the chapters with the text colors. They are each there for various reasons. But two colors in particular going back to read don't sit right. Somewhere between writing, and doing the colors. I messed up. Those colors are the green (light and dark) used when Philza talks. There is a reason why this happens and I've realized that when assigning colors I assigned some of his text wrong. For spoiler reasons I won't say what is going on, just that this (if not fixed) could cause problems with understanding things in the way I intend them.
Of course the colors are fully optional, as I will also go back and give a more show don't tell way for those of you who don't like the colors to understand the same spoiler later on.
Anyways drink water. Stay safe.