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Shadowfolds of the Heart by Kelseyalicia
Fandoms: Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon | Pretty Guardian Sailor Moon (Anime & Manga)
17 Nov 2025
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Back in the Realm of Radiance, we journey to another part of the land—similar to Maia’s—but here nature still thrives, and its people are, at least, alive. This region is ruled by Queen Shyeva, yet her secrets could destroy the Realm if she cannot unite two kingdoms!
This is a collaboration story: Sam writes it, and I edit it for everyone to enjoy.
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- Part 56 of Japananimegirl's stories
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The crew of the Cerritos were on their way home from defeating the Aledo when luck gave them a routine Second Contact mission. Only for it to be a trap by the planet’s locals and an ambitious pirate.
Ensign Boimler manages to save the ship at the cost of almost everything about him. Developing a severe case of Cerebral Hypoxia in a lucky break. Stuck in orbit of an archaic civilization, with no help in sight, his three best friends have to rely on each other to pick up the pieces.
They’re devastated, but supportive. But as their thoughts of each other bubble to the surface, and with a lot of downtime to think, it’s unclear where one ends and the other begins…
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- Part 2 of Everyone's Friend
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Humbling The Sky by Emi_Ogawa
Fandoms: 呪術廻戦 | Jujutsu Kaisen (Manga), 呪術廻戦 | Jujutsu Kaisen (Anime)
17 Nov 2025
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Ever since Gojo Satoru swooped in to rescue Mariya and her grandparents from a curse, the girl has been hero-worshipping him like he's the hottest thing since sliced bread — despite Utahime's eye-rolling warnings that she's heading for a major reality check. But Mariya is convinced that Satoru isn't the congenital idiot her friend makes him out to be.
After all, he's her knight in shining armor.
Right?
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Sixteen-year-old Gabrielle Rivers has a mother that is an award-winning scientist. Having never met her father in her entire life, Gabrielle looks for answers when her mother attends an awards banquet one evening. Searching for the whereabouts of her father is the least of Gabrielle’s worries, as her nighttime bedwetting has started up once again.
Gabrielle’s quest to find the truth is not made any easier when she has to deal with her almost three-year-old sister Abigail, who is still in diapers. Gabrielle can’t help but notice that there is something very strange about her sister. Her mother just says that Abigail has a strong sense of imagination, but after Gabrielle finds out everything, she is not quite sure that her mother is being truthful.
And even worse, Gabrielle’s mother finds Gabrielle reading forbidden documents in her bedroom. She takes Gabrielle into the kitchen and prepares a glass of milk for her. Gabrielle drinks the milk, but after a few hours, she doesn’t feel very well, and her world changes forever. Now trapped and full of the truth, Gabrielle can neither walk nor crawl and is unable to speak. Will she ever escape? Is she trapped with her mother forever?
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Magenta and Mint: A Proud Journey by Kelseyalicia for MagicMan2029
Fandoms: The Proud Family
17 Nov 2025
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Penny Proud is done shrinking. With a bold new look and Imani—a grounded, sharp-eyed friend who sees right through the noise—by her side, she’s finally learning to speak up and stand tall. But even the strongest friendships have growing pains, and when clashing styles, cultures, and dreams collide, Penny and Imani must decide what it truly means to grow together.
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- Part 2 of True Friendship
- Part 271 of Therapy stories
- Part 470 of Awareness stories
- Part 357 of Modern AU
- Part 540 of gift fic
- Part 570 of collection stories
- Part 14 of personal favs
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Caroline Forbes thought her life was perfectly normal — until she and Elena Gilbert are abducted by vampires Rose and Trevor. When Elena tries to have either Stefan or Damon compel her to forget, it fails — because Caroline can’t be compelled. Suddenly, she’s thrown into her friends’ supernatural world, only to realize she was part of it all along.
She learns she’s the soulmate of the Original family — the oldest and most powerful beings on Earth — that her father isn’t her real father, and her mother’s been hiding the truth about her identity and bloodline. Now, being their soulmate makes her the most hunted person alive.
And to think, she once believed paying bills with her mom was the hardest part of her life.
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Reforge My Mirrored Heart by Griffonfeet (Quillfeet)
Fandoms: My Time At Sandrock (Video Game), My Time At Portia (Video Game)
17 Nov 2025
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Six months after Enforcer Saoirse loses her soulmark (and her soulmate), a second one mysteriously appears. Surely it won't affect the Old World experiment she volunteered for.
A pissed and regretful Pen is suddenly sent back in time after a (false) soulmark appears. Surely this Enforcer who came with him won't be opposed to breaking a few skulls.
Logan isn't sure where Pen's new Enforcer (friend) came from, or why the two seem so united in saving Martle's Oasis. Surely this strange second soulmark has nothing to do with it.
Time travel fix-it + soulmark/soulmate fic
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Between six cardboard walls by Trickster (KAGAMINATOR7000)
Fandoms: Project DIVA (Video Games), Vocaloid
17 Nov 2025
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There are no mailboxes in Monochrome World.
Why would there be? Trickster doesn't use the postal service. It's too human.
There are no mailboxes in Monochrome World, but a package got delivered anyway.
Whose package is this? What's in it? Why does the content of the package thump around like cotton filling?
(Trickster, don't open mail that might not be yours. I mean, I'm just the narrator, he can't hear me anyway, so why bother?)Despite the lack of mailboxes in Monochrome World, the package made it in.
It must be fate, right? But then who did it come from and why did it come here?With a little teamwork and imagination, we can find the answer to about... maybe three quarters of those questions at most, sorry.
(This was inspired by my most recent package, a second-hand Ni-No-Sakura Fan Dance (Taito, 2013) plushie, which arrived unexpectedly early. The illustrations are edited and digitally drawn over from my own photographs. Trickster and the narration also discuss different ways to get merch and how to care for them, so you can also use this as tips for caring for your own plushies in real life.)
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Writing for my Minus Elevation AU
TLDR: Greed and Gluttony before (and probably after, eventually) they became sins, being the only two--aside from Pride--that were initially delvers/not from the facility itself.
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In the aftermath of the ever after, Ruby finds herself reincarnated in her Beacon aura. She's angry, at everyone and everything, but the person she hates more than anyone is none other than Pyrrha Nikos, the invincible girl who died for nothing.
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Rose and Raspberry were just normal wolves, doing normal wolf things. That is until the deaths of one of their leaders, which they then learn they have been chosen as heirs to their packs.
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Earning Trust by Trikucian
Fandoms: Fire Emblem: Fuukasetsugetsu | Fire Emblem: Three Houses
16 Nov 2025
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Byleth juggles her attraction for both the charming Prince Dimitri and the mysterious Seteth. Each chapter is from a single point of view and some are relatively short. Updates every Sunday.
The first truly explicit scene is in chapter 71.
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- Part 1 of Earning Trust (FE3H Longfic)
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Escape the Dream by LostYoshi
Fandoms: Xanadu Series - Bryan Derksen & Various, Original Work
16 Nov 2025
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The line between fiction and reality became blurred when a strange, powerful curse struck a sci-fi/fantasy convention, turning countless cosplayers into genuine superheroes, wizards, aliens, monsters, and more. Ten months since that incident, the world is still grappling with the sudden existence of the supernatural. The government and private businesses alike aim to recruit or restrain the most powerful beings around, while the weaker ones fall by the wayside.
But for those less fortunate ex-cosplayers, the ones that just want to end the curse and be human again, one name stands above the rest: Richard Turner. Forming a community with the goal of aiding victims of the curse, Richard has improved the lives of numerous transformed people, by playing within the rules of their character's stories. Despite his successes, however, he is far from a true cure, and the one person he wants to help most is always out of reach: His best friend Andy lies beyond the physical world, trapped in a fate worse than death.
Can Richard find a way to truly break the curse for Andy and the others? Or will Andy spend the rest of time in a never-ending nightmare?
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In the months following the defeat of Shroud a power vacuum has opened up leading to a rise in gang activity and city wide attacks. SDN is now under heavy scrutiny with some even blaming the company's loose cannon attitude for the skirmishes plaguing the city.
Sonar doesn't really care about that though. Things are going well at work and the bigger heroes are taking the heat. That is until a random rescue accidently lands him directly in the spotlight.
Mina is a assistant. She helps keep her boss organized and caffeinated, until a pushy co-worker lands her in a dangerous predicament that ends up hurting someone she admires.
I haven't written anything in a veeeeeeeeery long time, so any feedback would be very much appreciated.
- Language:
- English
- Words:
- 3,211
- Chapters:
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- Kudos:
- 11
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Planning for the Big Day: Rin's Request, Chiaki's Concern, and Aoi's Uncertainty by lefemmerouge2
Fandoms: ゆるキャン△ | Yuru Camp | Laid-Back Camp (Anime)
16 Nov 2025
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Aoi and Chiaki have a hard, but vital, task ahead of them which was given to them by Rin. Can they complete it, or will it be too late? Will they help Rin have eternal happiness, or will she end up missing out? You'll have to read to find out...
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- Part 5 of My Flufftober 2025 Collection
- Language:
- English
- Words:
- 915
- Chapters:
- 1/1
- Collections:
- 1
- Hits:
- 8
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Would the stars forget about me? by MehIzCringe
Fandoms: The World of Mr. Plant - Ashur Gharavi (Web Series)
16 Nov 2025
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Argos is typically alone at night, when their mind forces them to confront the idea of being forgotten and fading away, being known as nothing but a name on a gravestone, if anyone even cared enough to carve it for them.
When their mind starts whirring while at Mr Plant’s one night, Argos debates whether to open up to him about it, or simply suck it up.
- Language:
- English
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- 2,460
- Chapters:
- 1/1
- Kudos:
- 2
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- 14
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Ao'nung feels as if he's not good enough for Neteyam. Neteyam shuts that down faster than the speed of light.
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Witness Of The Void by ThyChorusShallChantA_SilkySong
Fandoms: Voices of the Void (Video Game)
16 Nov 2025
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The new job for him seems really good and not so much different from what he wanted. Of course, isolation for two whole months can be unpleasant, but he can always quit,
right?
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Harry Potter and the Ashes of the Grave by TheLoneSpirithunter
Fandoms: Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling
16 Nov 2025
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The gods were worried. The World as they knew it was far too damaged due to the schemes of one Wannabe Light Lord. So what did they decide to do?
They chose to offer to send the new master of Death back in time to fix everything.Harry Potter. The New Master of Death has just found out his life was controlled and his friends really were with him for the Money and are planning to kill him so when offered a chance to do it all again of course he says yes.
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Park Jimin, a sweet and gentle 16-year-old omega, is the youngest heir of the prestigious Park family. Raised by his father after his mother’s tragic passing, Jimin lives a life of luxury but often feels trapped within the walls of expectation. Known for his soft features, pastel-colored outfits, and kind heart, he’s admired by many—but few truly know him.
The one constant in his life? Min Yoongi—his 32-year-old uncle, a dominant alpha and powerful businessman. Feared and respected in the corporate world, Yoongi’s cold exterior softens only for Jimin. Fiercely protective, his instincts often blur the line between care and control.
To Jimin, Yoongi is a safe space—a steady anchor in his uncertain world. To Yoongi, Jimin is the one thing he can’t afford to lose.
“He’s the only thing in this world I can’t afford to lose.”
In a world ruled by instincts, hierarchy, and unspoken emotions, how long can Yoongi keep his protective nature from crossing deeper lines? And what happens when Jimin starts noticing the emotions hidden beneath his uncle’s guarded facade?And how far will Yoongi go to protect the one person who means everything to him?